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  • FormerMember
    FormerMember in reply to FormerMember

    Don't you mean "is there no start to your talents?"

    Wow a Schnauzer hating harpy to contend with as well? Well we all have our shit to deal with but my guess is your shit is more real than hers, but her world is obviously a worse place than many of us.

    Don't let it get you down, maybe yelling back equally crazy will do the trick and of course talk to yourself in a very loud voice, works for me. Seriously though just hang on in there, I think I'm lucky in the resilience stakes and I feel for the guys here who find it so hard to get along after their loved one has gone. Yet I still feel I am very fragile so far. 

    Your "MOR" tastes are good and I confess to liking all the acts you mentioned. (Don't tell my anarchist friends though)

    Keep strong and look after those little dogs...

    Interestingly I had a morning out with 'the lady' again, she came along to a fireplace shop to help me with the more technical aspects. The guy was totally bonkers and she kept bursting out laughing as he frantically waved his arms about trying to explain the intricacies of why he really needed to rebuild my flat and charge me loads of money. (I used to work as a builder and his talk was 95% bullshit) so we decided to go for coffee upon which the ladies neighbour rang and her mum had locked herself out of her house and we had to return to the Village they live in. So a good morning all round, I'll do the blasted stove myself that way it will be done right..err maybe. So a late coffee and very odd morning yet typically Italian!

  • Good to hear from Darkhorse, after a while, but sorry to hear that times are still tough.  Love your poem and hope that it helped you in some way. Not sure if you have seen my "Acknowledging Grief" which I posted separately under my post around the first anniversary in December 2019.  I have copied and pasted it below just in case you have not. Apologies for the repetition if you have....

    I have not written lately,; I think they call it writers block lol but watch this space!!

    I also have not been on this site lately. I recently joined WAY but not really into it at the moment hence back here, to familiarity and noticed updates on your poems thread.

    A quick hello to Limbo . Hope you are keeping well x

    And to the new, sorry you find yourself here. You made me laugh mcc!

    With lots of love,

    Dutsie Xx


    Acknowledging Grief

    I feel numb and disbelief,
    this moment shall pass
    I feel broken and isolated from the world,
    this moment shall pass
    I feel exhausted and lost in this world,
    this moment shall pass
    I feel a depth of sadness and despair I have never known before,
    this moment shall pass
    I feel empty and do not know how to fill this void,
    this moment will pass

    It is hard to let go of some moments that have passed
    They don't exist anymore but are painfully etched in our memories
    My love for what once was makes my heart beat unpredictably now
    This moment too shall pass

    For I have faith in the moments to come
    They will breathe life anew
    Looking through my moist eyes right now,
    I smile with a thought
    That time will bring "a season of faith's perfection"
    When a fragrant breeze will blow again
    A bud will blossom again
    The feeling of love will dominate once more and the fear will subside
    I await the day my heart sings once again,
    grateful for what once was and the moment right now


    (Copyright 2019 - Dutsie)




















  • Hi Dutsie,

    Good to hear from you. What a poem. I'm waiting for all those things to pass too. In the meanwhile, I'm as busy as a bee packing up and getting ready to leave my little bubble of an island. Will be spending a few weeks in France then going to one of the overseas territories where I got a teaching job.

    And you, how have you been doing? You should continue writing.

  • FormerMember
    FormerMember in reply to limbo

    There are somtimes

    when meloncholly spills over

    It turns to Despair. 

    Such time are when it hits me

    I'm not as tough and brave

    as I'd like to be.

    When I wish the sky would just fall 

    Down on my head.

    Then like you I could be dead. 

  • Please forgive bad poetry  - didn't sleep much. 3 of my first ever poems. 

    Cancer tethered and killed

    My randy old goat -  my love

    My heart, skin, body yearn

     ---------------------------

    Big heart, big ears, big hands

    Held me gently, loving cocoons

    He left this year, alone I stands

    He’s gone to the other world Wetherspoons

     ____________________________

    He was messy, bit flaky and rather sloppy,

    He’d leave his crap around, I got stroppy

    Broken phones, old gadgets and a million wires

    But he’d move my stuff ‘where are MY pliers’

    Bits of old shite that are a mystery to me

    He'd say.. ‘it’ll come in handy, just you see’

    I still have old flares lie around in their canisters

    But now, I cant move his pants off the banisters

    Oh bugger

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  • Absolutely  Lovely, thank you.

    Ellie x

  • Sums it up, Val. Thank you for sharing. 

    With lots of love,

    Dutsie Xx