Comedy

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On Monday I wrote a comedy sketch based on my experiences of the cancer bereavement group and performed it on Tuesday night with other people in front of an small but select audience, one of whom was an established stand-up comedian.  He liked it but said it was really two central comedic ideas and most comedy sketches need to concentrate on one.  So there you go: two for the price of one!

I used my experiences of talking about Flash and about Mum, to create the sketch.   No one realised how true to life it was.  They seemed to like it and find it funny, which was the main thing, and the actors said there were some great lines in it and that they'd enjoyed speaking them.  Music to my ears, as I'd enjoyed writing them.

OK it might have been somewhat black humour, being about cancer bereavement, but boy it helps!

There were four characters in it .  It was about the lives of these four people and the different backgrounds they all came from. I played one of the main characters myself and my acting was praised as well.

I can't say the process of writing it or acting it out in front of a live audience was easy, especially as it is so soon for me after bereavement of both my Mum (five months) and of dog (two weeks).  It really did beat sitting alone feeling sad though.  The sound of a group of people laughing at something I wrote, was really good.

It wasn't all laughter, there was some criticism, which sometimes comes as a shock if you are sensitive.  I think the two situations in the scene led to some confusion.  But it's nice to think all round that you have maybe too ideas than too few!  To me it was just the way the story went.

This was a first for me, people had always said I should try comedy and this was planned before my Mum died, so I went for it.  I did wonder how it would pan out in front of a bigger audience, but that's for another time.

And now for something completely different ...

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  • FormerMember
    FormerMember

    Sounds good to me and well done. We need more of us to lift the gloom- dying is a serious business but laughter is the best medicine.

    Keep smiling

    love

    Drew

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  • FormerMember
    FormerMember

    Hi Persephone, well done on achieving this. Here's hoping it will lead to bigger and better things in the future.

    Best wishes, Christine xx

  • FormerMember
    FormerMember

    Hi Persephone,

    Good for you !! - Does not really matter if the people laughed or cried - the real thing is you touched their emotions and made them think.

    You spoke out about a couple of taboo subjects that could never be funny - Bereavement and Cancer - How can anyone find humour in these forbidden subjects ? - Easy I - its our way of coping and people need to realise at times its ok to both hurt and talk about them.

    I know some may not agree or even think its wrong to link the 2  - but the loss of a loved pet can also be a bereavement - someone ready to give un- conditional love and complete trust - someone who never asks questions but always knows when we are hurting and is ready to offer their own style of comfort.

    Hope You continue to write - you do have a natural talent and are able to draw on your emotions and experience so others also feel and  understand.

    Hugs

    J xx

  • FormerMember
    FormerMember

    we have so many taboo subjects don't we and the only thing that can really cross the barriers is comedy.  Kudos to you and if any of those people felt better when they left than when they arrived, it's a job well done!

    Love & Strength,  Debs xx

  • FormerMember
    FormerMember

    Hi liked your idea of the comedy sketch, its good to smile.  Glad it went really well for you.  

    When you have cancer people have different ways of coping with it, i for instance created a group and spoke to family and friends to join in, we did have a good laugh picking characters but it also showed how much people did care and were routing for me to get better.  I was really shocked with my diagnosis and was sat at 2 am in the morning as i couldnt sleep, I logged on to my lap top and the google logo was surrounded by the Wizard of Oz advert.  I thought Dorothy wakes up and everything was a bad dream.  Well i was going to wake up too and i would all be over, so hence The Yellow Brick Road I could skip down with my friends and family.  What touched me most was family and friends love and support.  I have since uploaded my blog to give people a view of how to divert their fear into something rewarding.

    Good luck and carry on with your comedy sketches, you obviously have a talent.  

    Dawnief