Armistice Day

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Just wanted to share this poem with you.  My youngest son wrote it on a tour of the battlefields with the school.  It has been sitting in a box along with his other poems and writings but it seems too good not to be read and this seemed the right day.  I hope you enjoy it. x

Un-titled poem written at the Battlefields in France

By Andrew W - March 2016

What can be said that has not been said?

What words, if any, can honour the dead?

Words make us human, but this suffering and pain

Are far beyond words, they reach the inhumane

Boys become men, men scared like boys

Lost in the mud; voices lost in the noise

They did not resist just bravely went

For this freedom today, their lives were spent

They did not resist, scream, cry or shout

Just fought to the end, til their luck ran out

What tongue can re-tell the horror of war?

What mind can imagine the true grit and gore?

It’s barely a life to live in the trenches

Robbed of their time, robbed of adventures

They were much braver men than we can truly respect

Though it’s hard to imagine, we must not forget.

  • Former Member
    Former Member

    Just right, thanks to your son for writing this.

    My wife said this morning when we shut our eyes at 11.am, she only sees battlefields.

    The fallen looking down will be grateful to see this written. Thank your son Deb.

  • Tell Andrew it's excellent. I hope he will write more. In fact, having read a lot of war poetry I would say that it deserves publication. Keep writing Andrew.  Rainie x

  • What a wonderful, vivid and powerful poem Deb1E. Thank your son from me please.

    Take care, Tom.

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    Good on the school for taking them on a tour of the battlefields. It must be remembered by every generation. Lovely poem, thank you. 

    Stuart x 

  • What a thoughtful son you have to express those feelings xx

    Ruth 

  • Former Member
    Former Member

    That’s a beautiful poem

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    ProfoundHeart

  • Hi all

    Thank you I will pass your kind words on.  I have an ever growing box of what he calls his "scribblings".  

    Andrew went with the school choir and we joined them in Ypres to hear them take part in the Menin Gate last post ceremony.  It is a really moving ceremony listening to the choir and then the bugler standing under the gate filled with the names of over 50,000 british soldiers who have no marked graves puts things into perspective..  

    Love to all x

    Carpe Diem
    Deb1E
  • Thanks Deb, With people like your son around WE WILL NOT FORGET!

    Maybe you could gather all his 'scrribbling' pieces of paper and have then printed!

    Love Annette x

    Yesterday is History, Tomorrow is a Mystery, Today is a Gift!!!